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Summary of ChangesHello, I'm Gemini Code Assist1! I'm currently reviewing this pull request and will post my feedback shortly. In the meantime, here's a summary to help you and other reviewers quickly get up to speed! This pull request significantly enhances the documentation for TiDB Cloud Premium by integrating detailed connection instructions into existing guides for various GUI tools and sample applications. The changes aim to provide a seamless experience for users looking to connect their development environments and applications to TiDB Cloud Premium instances, covering setup steps from enabling public endpoints to configuring specific client-side connection parameters, including SSL settings where applicable. Highlights
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Code Review
This pull request adds documentation for the new TiDB Cloud Premium tier across various developer guides. The changes are generally well-executed and consistent. I've provided a few suggestions to enhance consistency in formatting and wording, ensuring the new content aligns perfectly with the existing documentation and style guidelines.
Note: Security Review has been skipped due to the limited scope of the PR.
| - **Connect using**: select **Server and Port**. | ||
| - **Server Address**: `{host}` | ||
| - **Port**: `{port}` | ||
| - **Database**: the database that you want to connect to. | ||
| - **Username**: `{user}` | ||
| - **Password mode**: select **SQLTools Driver Credentials**. | ||
| - In the **MySQL driver specific options** area, configure the following parameters: | ||
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| - **Authentication Protocol**: select **default**. | ||
| - **SSL**: select **Disabled**. |
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To improve consistency with the {{{ .starter }}} section in this document, I suggest using parameter names (e.g., HOST) instead of placeholders (e.g., {host}) and bolding the UI options for clarity.
| - **Connect using**: select **Server and Port**. | |
| - **Server Address**: `{host}` | |
| - **Port**: `{port}` | |
| - **Database**: the database that you want to connect to. | |
| - **Username**: `{user}` | |
| - **Password mode**: select **SQLTools Driver Credentials**. | |
| - In the **MySQL driver specific options** area, configure the following parameters: | |
| - **Authentication Protocol**: select **default**. | |
| - **SSL**: select **Disabled**. | |
| - **Connect using**: select **Server and Port**. | |
| - **Server Address**: enter the `HOST` parameter from the connection dialog. | |
| - **Port**: enter the `PORT` parameter from the connection dialog. | |
| - **Database**: the database that you want to connect to. | |
| - **Username**: enter the `USERNAME` parameter from the connection dialog. | |
| - **Password mode**: select **SQLTools Driver Credentials**. | |
| - In the **MySQL driver specific options** area, configure the following parameters: | |
| - **Authentication Protocol**: select **default**. | |
| - **SSL**: select **Disabled**. |
References
- The style guide (line 34) recommends using backticks for options and paths. This suggestion also improves consistency with other parts of the document by using parameter names and bolding UI elements. (link)
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| 4. Click **Overview** in the left panel to return to the overview page. | ||
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| 5. Click **Connect** in the upper right corner. A connection dialog is displayed. In the connection dialog, select `Public` from the **Connection Type** drop-down list. |
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For consistency with other documentation files, upper right should be hyphenated.
| 5. Click **Connect** in the upper right corner. A connection dialog is displayed. In the connection dialog, select `Public` from the **Connection Type** drop-down list. | |
| 5. Click **Connect** in the upper-right corner. A connection dialog is displayed. In the connection dialog, select `Public` from the **Connection Type** drop-down list. |
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- The style guide (line 20) recommends correcting spelling and punctuation mistakes. 'upper-right' is the consistent and correct form used across the documentation. (link)
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